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Had another practice with art style.
I think I'm getting the hang of it! =P (Razz) 

Time used: 3 hours
Tools used: Paint Tool SAI
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My first impression on this was that I absolutely love it. You're art style just got me and I love the expression that she has on her face, as well the the way you colored this piece and I just love all of it. You're shading is on point and the textures are pretty top notch. The way you did her eyes just adds a whole new level of emotion for me, and it helps me "feel" this in the most pristine sense.

Anyways, as good as you are, this isn't exactly perfect- but that's okay! That's what I'm here for. Anyways, the first thing I really noticed is that her eyes, while marveling at how great they look, I noticed how her eyes don't really line up the way they should be taking into consideration the angle of her head. Her right eye should be just a slight bit thinner (horizontally) and her left eye is way too high because the perspective of her face is slightly angled downward, and her left eye should be lower.

Also if you look to her left eye, a little bit to the right the "Big curl" on the left side of her space isn't drawn in. Her bangs intercept with it and you might have not noticed but there is a little patch of skin instead of where the base of that curl should be. Just a minor thing, but unless you did that on purpose, it bothered me a little.

Another thing about here hair is the the pony tail on the right blends in too much with the hair in the foreground. From that point, it should be slightly darker in shading because of the shadow cast by the front of her head. Just making it darker and separating it from the rest of the colors in the foreground should be a big help in making it look natural.

Anyways good job! I think you did amazing, and if you keep it up you're definitely going to be spectacular in the future! Kudos!